This is probably the best Supernatural fic I have read so far - and it's saying something given the high number of them in my repertorie of readings-. You've got all well balanced, the back story, the conection with the series, the cannon secondary characters, the relationship... AND you've got the character's voices incredibly right. You Sam is soooo Sam, all brainy and with his inner voice so high; your Dean is as protector as ever and is highly believable they were conscious of thier feelings since years ago -more conscious Sam, more in denial Dean- and that only Sam ever thought of acting on it. In one word: believable. All of it. I'm about to check right now is you've more more jewels of fics on your journal, and keep on commenting. Really, congrats. AND thank you very much for sharing this with me, with all of us. Keep up the good work. Maik P.S.: Oh, by the way. In my humble opinion and, because all things might be impoved with a bit of really good sex, I had in my mind to pick your pride telling you that I think this fic would be even better if you haddn't shied away from extending the sex scene at the end. It was going so smooth and romantic and hot! I felt somewhat cheated by the cut of the scene, like iI was watching somoe PG movie at TV or something. But it really was classy. So maybe it's just that ?m so gready of our boys sexin' up that it mess with my brain and my critic eye. So, I'm only saying that -for ME- it would have been some improvement. Yeah! Maik.
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Date: 2012-03-31 10:26 am (UTC)You've got all well balanced, the back story, the conection with the series, the cannon secondary characters, the relationship... AND you've got the character's voices incredibly right. You Sam is soooo Sam, all brainy and with his inner voice so high; your Dean is as protector as ever and is highly believable they were conscious of thier feelings since years ago -more conscious Sam, more in denial Dean- and that only Sam ever thought of acting on it. In one word: believable. All of it.
I'm about to check right now is you've more more jewels of fics on your journal, and keep on commenting.
Really, congrats. AND thank you very much for sharing this with me, with all of us.
Keep up the good work.
Maik
P.S.: Oh, by the way. In my humble opinion and, because all things might be impoved with a bit of really good sex, I had in my mind to pick your pride telling you that I think this fic would be even better if you haddn't shied away from extending the sex scene at the end. It was going so smooth and romantic and hot! I felt somewhat cheated by the cut of the scene, like iI was watching somoe PG movie at TV or something.
But it really was classy. So maybe it's just that ?m so gready of our boys sexin' up that it mess with my brain and my critic eye. So, I'm only saying that -for ME- it would have been some improvement. Yeah!
Maik.